Sarah became more worried when her eight-year-old daughter Harper always got home late from dance class.
Sarah knew something wasn’t right, even though Harper tried to explain it. She and her husband David chose to follow Harper and found out something shocking.
As they looked into it, they found an empty warehouse where Harper was meeting Angela, a woman with a troubled past, in secret. Sarah felt torn between anger and compassion as she dealt with the issue.
Angela’s story showed a mother who was desperate and had taken from Sarah’s mother, leaving her poor.
An unexpected turn of events led Sarah and David to decide to help Angela. They knew how important it was to be kind and give people another chance.
When they went to see Angela at a women’s shelter, Harper’s kindness and care shone through, causing a remarkable change.
Because of this, Sarah learnt that understanding and forgiveness are sometimes stronger than anger and hatred. The fact that Harper’s actions led to a good outcome shows how being kind can affect those around us.
The new version is the same length and says the same thing as the old one, but it has a different point of view and a more interesting tone.
